Jamie Marlow - Revision history

AngryPotatoChipz at 14:13, 19 May 2024

2024-05-19T14:13:05Z

2022-08-13T16:55:42Z

Adding some more alterations and updating to her page her past before coming to Saint's Crossing.

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Character

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 |caption = ''Tin Type of Deputy Marlow''
 |fullname = Jamie Noelle Marlow
-|status = {{Alive}}
+|status = {{Deceased}}
 |alias =
 |nickname =
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 |significantother =
 |horse = Dante (Black Turkoman)
-|portrayedby = [[AngryPotatoChipz]]
+|portrayedby = [[Autumn__Raven]]
 |deathdate =
 |causeofdeath =

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 |birthplace = Adams County, Iowa
 |significantother =
-|horse = Orca (Black Tovero)
+|horse = Dante (Black Turkoman)
 |portrayedby = [[AngryPotatoChipz]]
 |deathdate =
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 <h5>Early Life</h5>
-<p>Raised in Adams County on a ranch owned by her parents, Vincent and Maria, Jamie lived a relatively simple life. She was taught how to fish by her father, and how to shoot by her brother.</p>
+<p>Jamie Noelle Marlow was born on January 2nd, 1,878 on a ranch in Adams County, Iowa. She is the youngest child of Vincent and Maria Marlow and she is the youngest of four. She has three older siblings, Jason, Rebecca, and Jackie Marlow.</p>
-<p>As Jamie grew older, her twin sister Jackie convinced her to don the badge in Adams County.</p>
+<p>Growing up, she was taught how to fish by her father, how to shoot by her brother, and how to ride a horse by her mother. She lived a relatively uneventful and normal life, outside of falling off of a ladder at a younger age which caused her to break an arm. This led to her fear of heights.</p>
 ==Events in Saint's Crossing==
 ==Character==
 <h5>Personality</h5>
-<p>Deputy Marlow is strong willed, stubborn, and compassionate. She has walls that she very rarely lets down.</p>
+<p>Deputy Marlow is strong-willed, stubborn, and compassionate. She has walls that she very rarely lets down.</p>
 <h5>Appearance</h5>

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 [[Category:Characters]]
 [[Category:Law Officers]]
 {{Character
 |name = Jamie Marlow
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 |burialsite =
 }}
 ==History==

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 |birthplace = Adams County, Iowa
 |significantother =
-|horse = Orca, Black Tovero
+|horse = Orca (Black Tovero)
 |portrayedby = [[AngryPotatoChipz]]
 |deathdate =

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 |gender = Female
 |title = Deputy
-|occupation = LEO
+|occupation = Law Enforcement Officer
 |affiliation = [[Saint’s Crossing Sheriff’s Department]]
 |relatives = Jason Marlow (brother), Rebecca Marlow (sister)

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−	<b>Jamie Marlow</b> is a Deputy of the [[Saint's Crossing Sheriff's Department]]	+	<b>Jamie Marlow</b> is a Deputy of the [[Saint's Crossing Sheriff's Department]].

	==History==		==History==

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 |occupation = Deputy
 |affiliation = [[Saint’s Crossing Sheriff’s Department]]
-|relatives = Jason Marlow ''(brother)'', Rebecca Marlow ''(sister)''
+|relatives = Jason Marlow (brother), Rebecca Marlow (sister)
 |birthdate = January 2nd, 1878
 |age = 23

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 <h5>Personality</h5>
-<p>Strong willed. Stubborn. Compassionate. Deputy Marlow has walls that she very rarely lets down.</p>
+<p>Deputy Marlow is strong willed, stubborn, and compassionate. She has walls that she very rarely lets down.</p>
 <h5>Appearance</h5>
-<p>Raven black hair that changes styles frequently. She has freckles, and her left eye is missing. She has a scar from the cauterization of the wound.</p>
+<p>Deputy Marlow has raven black hair that changes styles frequently. She has freckles, and her left eye is missing. She has a scar from the cauterization of the wound.</p>
 <p>She dresses in a tan vest, black leather shirt, and occasionally wears a tan long coat over it.</p>